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Margot Expelled by Minim Rated: General starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Margot gets expelled after her actions towards Ted in Theodora. But how will everyone react, and can Margot be redeemed?


Categories: Ste Therese's House
Characters: Con Maynard, Emerence Hope, Jack Maynard, Jo (Bettany) Maynard, Len Maynard, Margot Maynard, Mary-Lou Trelawney, Minor character(s), Rosamund Lilley, Ruey Richardson, Stephen Maynard, Ted Grantley
School Period: Switzerland
School Name: Chalet School
Genre: Family
Series: A New Chance
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10562 Read Count: 29308
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2011 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
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Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Term Carries On

That was fun :) Great explanation for people being excited about chapels!

Summary: What if Joey didn't marry Jack?
Categories: Ste Therese's House
Characters: Jack Maynard, Jo (Bettany) Maynard, OC
School Period: Tyrol
School Name: Chalet School
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Domestic, Family, Friendship, Humour, War
Series: Alternative Joey
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 117027 Read Count: 56451
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2011 Updated: 30 Dec 2014
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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

What a nice man! :) Good to see this back.

Author's Response: Thank you ! Glad to know you are glad to see it back :-)

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Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

aw Jack is sweet :)

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Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Joey makes a decision 03/01/12

Wow! I'm intrigued by the direction this is going :) And yeah, the people are gossiping anyway, they might as well do the actual "crime"!

Author's Response: Lol. Glad you are intrigued ! I'm still up and down about where this is going, but we will see !!

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Nancy's War

That was really interesting! Thanks :)

Author's Response: You are welcome :-) Thanks for reviewing.

What Matey Knows by Eleanore Rated: General starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 91]
Summary:

Following their adventure with the "young lake" in The Chalet School and Richenda, Nancy and Kathie embark on a relationship - with various minor trials and tribulations along the way.

Complete.


Categories: Ste Therese's House
Characters: Hilda Annersley, Kathie Ferrars, Matron Lloyd, Nancy Wilmot, Nell Wilson, Rosalie Dene
School Period: Switzerland
School Name: Chalet School
Genre: Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31557 Read Count: 52458
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2011 Updated: 20 Nov 2011
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Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 34: What Nancy knows

I'm sad that it's ended, but that was a fun ending!

Author's Response:

It's lovely to know you enjoyed it :)

Summary: The Triplets and Friends start their own school in Cornwall. Follows on from end of All Change Reorganised, but can stand alone.
Categories: St Scholastika's House
Characters: Amy Stevens, Bride Bettany, Con Maynard, Felicity Maynard, Felix Maynard, Jo (Bettany) Maynard, Kathie Ferrars, Len Maynard, Margot Maynard, Minor character(s), Nancy Wilmot, Nell Wilson, OC, Ruey Richardson, Ted Grantley, Tom Gay
School Period: Future
School Name: None
Genre: Adventure, Alternate Universe, Crossover, Domestic, Family, Friendship, Humour, Romance, School Story, Slash
Series: All Change Universe
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102312 Read Count: 103252
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2011 Updated: 13 Sep 2015
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Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Inks and more 12/10/11

I wish my school had been this much fun as well :) It reminds me a bit of Percy Jackson - how the students are suited to adventure and not to sitting still in classrooms! :)

Author's Response: Yes thats true! I may have unintentionally stolen some of that idea, but hadn't any PJ in my head when writing, so wasn't intentional !

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Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Josie and Ge 17/10/11

Nice handling there! :) I'm really curious what the "surprise" is for the non-Christians...

Author's Response: Glad you liked it ! It's not that exciting unfortunately !!

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Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Well, that's a great way around the issue - I like the suggestion too that after 16 they get to opt out, and it's fair enough before that really if the parents don't excuse them. LOVE the boxing-prayers!

Author's Response: Yes, I thought that gave an indication that the school isn't going to be too proscriptive, but is still taking the views and concerns of the parents into consideration. Considering that this is the early 1960s, there would be a lot of change going on in religion and social attitudes, so the school does need to consider everything. Thanks for reviewing and glad that it seems a good way around the issue !

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Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 A sense of Adventure. 16/11/11

Ooh, this is exciting :)

Author's Response: Glad you still enjoying !!

Summary:

Retelling of New Mistress via a Social Network Profile


Categories: St Scholastika's House
Characters: Kathie Ferrars, Nancy Wilmot, Nell Wilson
School Period: Switzerland
School Name: Chalet School
Genre: Alternate Universe, Friendship, Humour, Romance, Slash
Series: FileSpace
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66862 Read Count: 67309
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2011 Updated: 31 Dec 2011
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Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 34

Now that I'm able to review again can I just say how much I LOVE this drabble - I think it's my favourite on the board at the moment! N&K are sweet. Love how you brought in the Terrible Changes as well... I too am getting the hang of it but it is alarming when you first see it changed with arrows pointing all over the place! Glad Biddy is accepting in this one (not that it wasn't realistic/interesting/dramatic in the one where she didn't, though) Keep it up please!

Author's Response: Thank you !! And yay for being able to review now !! Though you were lovely and had said thank you anyway, tis nice to say hello on here too !! I'm glad you like it - this happened to me, I was ill a few days, logged on again and was confused!! Looks ok though, so far!!

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Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 38 Gossip 16/10/11

LOL! Helena Handbasket! :D Love it!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it !

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Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 38 Gossip 16/10/11

LOL! Helena Handbasket! :D Love it!

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Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 39 25/10/11 Balloons ...

LOL what an image! :D ooh I wish we could hear for once what Miss Annersley said to the miscreants... Thanks!

Author's Response: lol - I doubt that she would have to say much, bet they would wither into a heap with one look !

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Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 40 04/11/11 Twelve days of madness.

You should publish this for use at all xmas gathers everywhere! :D

Author's Response: Ha ! Thank you ! lovely comment

Summary:

Meeting young Tam Lin in the woods, Con finds herself drawn into a world she knows nothing about. Will she ever find her way out of it?


Categories: Ste Therese's House
Characters: Con Maynard, David Russell, Hilda Annersley, Jack Maynard, Jem Russell, Jo (Bettany) Maynard, Len Maynard, Madge (Bettany) Russell, Margot Maynard, Nell Wilson, OC, Roger Richardson, Ruey Richardson, Stephen Maynard
School Period: Future
School Name: Chalet School
Genre: Angst, Crossover, Family, Het, Romance, Scifi/Fantasy
Series: Augusta: The Chronicles, Standalones
Chapters: 97 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95522 Read Count: 91715
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Feb 2012
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Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 70: In Follied Fears

Great to see more of this :) I missed it!

Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting - I'm glad you've been enjoying it :-)

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Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: At the End of Seven Years (18/10/11)

Wow. Love the way this brings all the bits at the chapter openings together. Very spooky and exciting!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it :-)

Summary:

Mary-Lou spends a summer on an archaeological dig in France during her student days


Categories: St Agnes' House
Characters: Mary-Lou Trelawney
School Period: Switzerland
School Name: Chalet School
Genre: Drama
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12713 Read Count: 9897
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2011 Updated: 16 Jan 2012
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Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Sounds like a fun night! Good for Mary-Lou deciding to live dangerously :)

Summary:

When Madge and Joey's cousin, Isobel, arrives at the Chalet School, she hopes to study hard and still enjoy her one passion in life - music. However, her jolly time at school is marred by the dislike of one member of her form.


Categories: St Agnes' House
Characters: Beth Chester, Daisy Venables, Gwensi Howell, Jem Russell, Jo (Bettany) Maynard, Madge (Bettany) Russell, Minor character(s), OC
School Period: Armishire
School Name: Chalet School
Genre: School Story
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52453 Read Count: 66336
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2011 Updated: 12 Feb 2012
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Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Bad News for Gwensi - Part III

You nearly had me in tears there. Very powerful writing. Thanks!

Summary:

The Chalet School is challenged by the arrival of a pupil with Aspergers Syndrome.  How will they cope?


Categories: Ste Therese's House
Characters: None
School Period: Future
School Name: Chalet School
Genre: School Story
Series: Rachel Tests the Chalet School
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110729 Read Count: 89249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2011 Updated: 10 Feb 2012
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Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Saturday Evening

Oh wow... hope they're both ok! Thanks :)

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Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Rachel is such an interesting character. I think I'm learning a lot from this drabble! So thanks :) I hope she'll be OK at the dance!

Summary: Grease crossover / retelling. What if the triplets finished their schooling at Rydell High ?
Categories: St Scholastika's House
Characters: Con Maynard, Len Maynard, Margot Maynard
School Period: Future
School Name: Chalet School
Genre: Alternate Universe, Het, Humour, Romance
Series: Triplets Rydell, Random Short Crossovers
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21786 Read Count: 19417
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2011 Updated: 30 Sep 2011
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Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Triplets and Rizzo. 28/09/11

Brilliant :)
It's sweet how they've worked things out there, and the song really fits in!

Author's Response: Oh thanks for that! I was posting in the middle of the night and woke up feeling maybe I had shoehorned it all together too much, glad you liked it!

Summary:

After the holidays, Augusta's journey back to School is more eventful than she had planned.


Categories: St Agnes' House
Characters: Minor character(s), OC
School Period: Armishire
School Name: Chalet School
Genre: Humour, School Story
Series: Augusta: The Chronicles
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5468 Read Count: 6590
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2011 Updated: 26 Sep 2011
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Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Hilda's Choice (25/09/11)

Great to see Augusta back. Hilda practically speechless for once - funny!

Summary:

It's another beginning for Scar when she is not a spy anymore. Fortunately she'll be preoccupied with her form, the Seniors, and a locket...


Categories: St Clare's House
Characters: OC
School Period: Future
School Name: Glendower House
Genre: School Story
Series: Scar at the Chalet School
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17050 Read Count: 19695
[Report This] Published: 06 Aug 2011 Updated: 31 Dec 2011
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Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - An Accident at Break 16/10/11

Poor Betty! Glad to see this back :)

Summary: Big Brother Chalet School Style.
Categories: St Scholastika's House
Characters: Mary-Lou Trelawney
School Period: Future
School Name: Chalet School
Genre: Alternate Universe, Crossover, Humour, Slash
Series: Random Short Crossovers, EBD unit, Plot Bunny Stories / EBD Unit
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6956 Read Count: 14085
[Report This] Published: 09 Sep 2011 Updated: 08 Nov 2011
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Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was fun :) I feel sorry for poor Tristan, he's so dazed!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it :-) I know, poor Tristan!