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Summary:
Categories: Ste Therese's House
Characters: Jack Maynard, Jo (Bettany) Maynard, Sybil Russell
School Period: None
School Name: None
Genre: Alternate Universe, Romance
Series: Warmth
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1000 Read Count: 2215
Jo Bettany and Jack Maynard meet quite by accident at a train station, years after they've lost touch.
Categories: Ste Therese's House
Characters: Jack Maynard, Jo (Bettany) Maynard, Sybil Russell
School Period: None
School Name: None
Genre: Alternate Universe, Romance
Series: Warmth
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1000 Read Count: 2215
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2011 Updated: 07 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Carys Signed 


Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Ships in the Night
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Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Ships in the Night
I really enjoyed this, I think it's a very true what might have been.
A couple of things you might like to edit though, at one point Harry is described as Jack's son and also know is used instead of no.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the head's up - have edited it now! I've been trying to catch mistakes as I upload the stories but obviously need to step up my game a little! :D