Reviewer: Pie-faced loon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2018 3:43 am Title: Chapter 1

Seems quite believeable to me, though if Matey catches Peggy sitting on the bed, there's going to be trouble!  Nice to see the cousins together.  I'm sure when Mary was there before Peggy came they would have spent time together as well.

Reviewer: Vick Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2014 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1

Love the little interlude between cousins.  Nice to see them alone for a change.

Thanks Elennare



Author's Response:

Thank you! I like to think they would have spent time together, even if we don't see it much.

Reviewer: JB1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2014 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lovely. I do like seeing characters off duty in this way.

Author's Response:

Thank you! It's fun to explore their interactions outside work :)

Reviewer: ivohenry Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2014 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice to see the cousins chatting together, and this is a very believable topic. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad it felt believable :)

Reviewer: Fiona Mc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2014 11:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Thanks that's a lovely conversation between the two of them



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: Beecharmer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2014 9:40 am Title: Chapter 1

Love this, thank you. Simple and honest, and had forgotten that they were cousins, it's nice seeing the family friendship.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm happy you liked it :) I think EBD might have forgotten that they were cousins, it never gets mentioned in the later books ;) But I like to think they were good friends.

Reviewer: Joanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2014 4:55 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting! Although I doubt they'd actually have a conversation about it, I can quite believe their attitudes so the conversation is plausible!

Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I doubt the subject would have come up out of nowhere, but in Rosalie's place I'd definitely have been feeling a bit fed up after Jo's questions, and wanting to discuss it with someone less pro "marriage and a gazillion babies is what everyone should have/want" than Jo, and Peggy's cheeky enough to get away with asking about it... (Also, though it's not in the story because I didn't remember it at the time, Mary had just had her twins, so I suspect that letter to Peggy might have had a paragraph or two about the joys of motherhood, and 'when are you going to get married?'). I'm glad their attitudes seemed plausible to you :)



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