Date: 27 May 2018 3:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Seems quite believeable to me, though if Matey catches Peggy sitting on the bed, there's going to be trouble! Nice to see the cousins together. I'm sure when Mary was there before Peggy came they would have spent time together as well.
Date: 24 Jul 2014 9:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Love this, thank you. Simple and honest, and had forgotten that they were cousins, it's nice seeing the family friendship.
Thank you! I'm happy you liked it :) I think EBD might have forgotten that they were cousins, it never gets mentioned in the later books ;) But I like to think they were good friends.
Date: 24 Jul 2014 4:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting! Although I doubt they'd actually have a conversation about it, I can quite believe their attitudes so the conversation is plausible!
Thank you! I doubt the subject would have come up out of nowhere, but in Rosalie's place I'd definitely have been feeling a bit fed up after Jo's questions, and wanting to discuss it with someone less pro "marriage and a gazillion babies is what everyone should have/want" than Jo, and Peggy's cheeky enough to get away with asking about it... (Also, though it's not in the story because I didn't remember it at the time, Mary had just had her twins, so I suspect that letter to Peggy might have had a paragraph or two about the joys of motherhood, and 'when are you going to get married?'). I'm glad their attitudes seemed plausible to you :)