Reviewer: Audrey Whitfield Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2014 12:38 am Title: The avenues of time

Really loved this - the exploring thread, the ghost thread and the Verity thread all tied up together!



Author's Response:

Trying to figure out just how to work them all in there was part of the fun of writing it :D. Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: PaulineS Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2014 12:30 pm Title: The avenues of time

Thank you.  A lovely tale which could so easily have happened to ML and Verity.



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Beecharmer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2014 10:14 am Title: The avenues of time

Really enjoyed that, thank you. This Mary Lou feels just right.

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Thank you!

Reviewer: Fiona Mc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2014 1:02 am Title: The avenues of time

That was really good.  Loved the scene with Mary Lou and Verity when their parents were about to get married.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I always wish there'd been more 'behind-the-scenes' with what their family life was like in the books - given both ML and Verity are stubborn, and neither of them loves change, I'm sure it can't have all been smooth sailing.

Reviewer: Vick Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2014 9:16 pm Title: The avenues of time

Glad that Mary-Lou managed to work out how to appease the spirit, also that she just knew when to ring Verity too.

Thanks Nightwing :-D



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Thank you!

Reviewer: chattie Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2014 2:24 pm Title: The avenues of time

Spooky but very enjoyable!  You actually had me thinking about the tunnels in Exeter (whcih I remember visiting when I was about 10) before I even got to the End Notes!



Author's Response:

The Exeter tunnels definitely stayed with me for a long time after I visited! Thanks for your comment :)



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