Date: 27 May 2016 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 Part I
Surely a few EBDisms are necessary for a story in EBD's world? ;-)
I agree - it's great that you do this as well as all your other activities. You might be termed a Person of Parts!
And I will be rather happy when the next episode comes, though not intending to put pressure on you...
Date: 24 May 2016 1:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 Part I
Meant to add - thanks so much for the colossal effort you're putting in on this amazing and epic story, not least when you also work, sing, and study so hard!
Date: 24 May 2016 1:33 pm Title: Chapter 1 Part I
Don't worry about it Finn. I'm sure your readers are really far more interested in the quality of the writing and the gripping narrative. Plenty of published authors forget what they called people part way through, and they've had editors who should've spotted the errors too. Anyway, much rejoicing at the return of this fabulous story!
Maybe I should hire chattie (or Minim, whose post I've accidentally deleted! Sorry Minim) as an editor! I could definitely do with someone to keep track of the details for me… o.O (it isn't easy, trying to write a very long story over an enforcedly very long time!
Date: 24 May 2016 11:45 am Title: Chapter 1 Part I
Just to clarify - I will go back and alter all incorrect names. Sorry for making those mistakes - it's a long drabble, I've been writing it for a long time and I don't exactly have a lot of spare time, so when my cursory check revealed no names I just assumed I hadn't named them. I shall sort that all out now. Thank you.
Date: 20 May 2016 2:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 Part I
Hurrah! Wonderful to see this back - more, please 😊
Date: 18 May 2016 11:09 am Title: Chapter 1 Part I
YAAAAAAAAY! It's back! I do feel sorry for Susie, and I am wibbling a bit about Mrs Henderson, and Bill, but I am just enjoying reading this.
I do like the description of Quakers as 'God's anarchists'. It would be a good title for a book on Quakerism!
I wonder if it's been used already? It sounds like the sort of thing Christopher Hill would have written :-)
Date: 13 Nov 2015 12:52 am Title: Chapter 21, Part 2
What do you mean - END OF PART 2? How dare you leave us hanging like this, you cheeky besom? I have loads of questions I need answered soon! xx
Such as? :-D
(Wouldn't like to leave any unanswered, after all!)
Date: 13 Nov 2015 12:04 am Title: Chapter 21, Part 2
Oh dear! So Susie has seen Tristan with another woman - but Tristan hasn't (yet!) seen Susie with another man. Do hope when Susie reflects, she'll think the other woman is just a friend, as she and Bill are just friends. Also that this will perhaps lead her to stop seeing Bill, don't think he's good for her! This is a bit of a cliff, more soon please!
Date: 11 Nov 2015 11:02 am Title: Chapter 21, Part 1
Oo-er. I think I can guess what is going to happen next. Please let it not be too anguished.
Date: 10 Nov 2015 7:26 pm Title: Chapter 21, Part 1
Ah, I feel Susie might find it harder to disentangle herself from Bill than she thinks. In those days a man with his background, however left wing and forward thinking he felt himself to be, would think that having gone out together several times they were 'going steady'. This is very interesting......
And we've never known Susie to get accidentally entangled in things that then spiral out of her control before, have we? :-D
Date: 19 Sep 2015 10:20 am Title: Chapter 20, Part II
Oh my!!!! Though I desperately want to get my Tristan and Matty Flags out again, as I think they are so lovely together, it really doesn't sound like Tristan is necessarily gay :-(
*glares at Tristan as I really would honestly love to see Tristan and Matty together*
*awaits next update hopefully despite common sense saying no*
You know what, I too would love Tristan and Matty to work out - that was actually my original intention when I introduced Matty! He would be much better for Tristan than Susie - but Tristan just refused to be gay. I'm deeply disappointed in him…