Reviewer: shesings Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think jay has summed up what I was thinking! Beautiful job, Finn!

Reviewer: jayj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 4

Gorgeous. Again. 

I'm absolutely loving the complexity and the layers you're building up for Juliet's character and history, and the subtlety with which you pack this with details that evoke a particular time and place. Very well done indeed



Author's Response:

Thank you for such a charming comment! And your previous one too. Flawless is a word that is slightly terrifying...

Reviewer: PaulineS Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 8:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for the update.  I have major gaps in understanding the Betchley Park set upp and work.

Reviewer: Beecharmer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 4

Enjoying this, can see Juliet in this universe. Very real scene thank you. Intriguing having these flashbacks and gradually piecing together the history. Thank you.

Reviewer: TumbleweedQueen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 5:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yumyum, a new Finn story. I'm hooked already. As jayj says, most evocative.

BTW, I think a friend of mine who likes all things sockish would be most interested in your song, if you're prepared to share the rest of it? She would dismiss your unreceptive family as Philistines!



Author's Response:

As a matter of fact, I intend to disclose the song later on in this story, so if you can bide your patience till then, all will be revealed! (If not, I'd be most happy to email it to you :) )

Reviewer: jayj Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2013 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 3

Gorgeous and flawless and tantalizing. And more please! This is such a compelling evocation of a world, and it's great to see Juliet at the different stages of her life. 

Reviewer: Beecharmer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 10:06 am Title: Chapter 3

Very real as always, am looking forward to more :-)

Reviewer: Beecharmer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 10:03 am Title: Chapter 2

Very realistic mix of emotions thank you.

Reviewer: Beecharmer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1

Oooh good start! Am intrigued!

Reviewer: jayj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 2

aw, poor Juliet! and lovely to see Sarah! and predictably I want to know who the striking redhead is...



Author's Response:

This drabble is chock full of real people, jayj. I'm going to enjoy it, I think :D the red-head will be revealed shortly, I promise...

Reviewer: shesings Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 4:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

How did I miss the first chapter? This is fascinating, Finn.

Author's Response:

Glad you think so :)

Reviewer: jayj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

wonderfully evocative - thank you, Finn! 



Author's Response:

Thank you!



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