Date: 15 Feb 2014 3:24 pm Title: The Abbess Returns
Really well written. You captured her feelings really well and I think they are very understandable in the circumstances.
I really like the ending of the story and how she still isn't fully recovered, but she knows she's taken the first step and will be able to manage.





Date: 17 Feb 2013 4:02 pm Title: The Abbess Returns
A very believable account of what might have happened and how Hilda might have felt. Thanks, Ruth.





Date: 17 Feb 2013 1:38 pm Title: The Abbess Returns
Poor Hilda, it's a horrible feeling when there's a sea of faces, your legs have gone to rubber, your stomach is doing somersaults and your brain has gone on holiday without you! Good that Nell realised how she would feel and helped without it being obvious!
Date: 17 Feb 2013 8:45 am Title: The Abbess Returns
Glad Hilda had such a good friend in Nell to insist she do it and give her the strength. After so long off it must have felt terrifying to face the whole school at once.
Thanks Ruth
Date: 17 Feb 2013 7:56 am Title: The Abbess Returns
It always annoyed me that Joey guilt-tripped Nell - although at least she left Hilda in peace - into coming back before she was ready. Hope Hilda gets more support.