Reviews For An Unholy Trinity
Reviewer: chanlaichun Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2013 11:17 am Title: Chapter 15 - Things Take an Alarming Turn

It's not true that the last chapter held no appeal for anyone! I love it.

Reviewer: shesings Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2013 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Things Take an Alarming Turn

Sorry I missed commenting on the last update, Mary, but I loved them both. Poor Nell, having to do something which ges against all her beliefs and morals.

Reviewer: Squirrel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2013 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Things Take an Alarming Turn

Oh My Word!!!  Action packed isn't the word for these two chapters Mary!!!  It's just one thing after another!   How these men keep on fighting!  The women think they know where they had them, and next thing they know one of the 'already dealt with' men are coming at them once again!  Each tussle leads to an even more debilitating blow to the men, until at last, one of them is actually killed.

It's scary how close all three of the women come to death, and how they each need one another to help them get out of it.  So good.  And yet, the underhand men try to attack Guinever anyway?  How cowardly they are.  How much they try to cheat and make every attempt to overcome, despite being fairly (and Squarely) defeated.  Well done Merlin and everyone else (and Nell for having the courage to fire yet another bullet into a man).

As for not liking the last chapter, I just didn't get there...  Far different thing.  Although I do think the two read brilliantly as one consecutive bit of writing.

Thank you! :-)

Reviewer: Beecharmer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2013 9:06 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Things Take an Alarming Turn

What a Battle! SURELY they will admt defeat now !!!??? Thank you :-)



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