Date: 01 Jan 2013 3:25 am Title: An Alternative Ending (28-12-12)
Thank you for the alternate ending. I just wish this was canon T&M. I've tried to get behind a T&S pairing since this looks like where the story is going but while I can perhaps see them having a fling I just can't see them lasting long term.
Date: 29 Dec 2012 11:09 pm Title: An Alternative Ending (28-12-12)
Well, I have missed a lot! Brilliant Finn! Loved Sarah and Ted getting together and, no doubt, living happily ever after. I like Susie and Tristan almost together but I like Matty and Tristan's ending too. Of course you could manage both if ......
Hard to do both, unless Tristan has a sudden change of heart (as Kathryn maintains he will sooner or later!) - but it was fun to write the alternative :) Tristan and Susie are altogether more tricky.
As for Ted and Sarah, they are both mature enough and solid enough to be reasonably happy and settled, which is nice :) Thank you for your review!
Date: 28 Dec 2012 9:49 pm Title: An Alternative Ending (28-12-12)
Beautifully written, Finn, but I still prefer Tristan/Susie!
Good good, because that's the way things are supposed to go! But I am very pleased with how that scene turned out - I like it much better than the Ted and Sarah scene. Maybe the gods of writing are trying to tell me something - I know Kathryn would say they were!
Date: 28 Dec 2012 8:41 pm Title: An Alternative Ending (28-12-12)
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY !!!!!!! Thank you ! That was a real surprise, I honestly thought Sarah and Ted getting together was my present!! Wahey !!! Thank you !!
You're very welcome, my dear! I knew you'd like a bit of slash-fluff for Christmas :D
Date: 28 Dec 2012 5:00 pm Title: The end of the day - almost midnight (28-12-12)
Just come online for first time since Christmas Eve - nice to have this to come back to. Lovely happy ending! I know it's not T & M canon, but hope one day we'll have a happy ending of some sort ther , for Susie at least, and Evelyn, since they aren't EBD's people so you can do what you like with them!
Thanks for commenting, ivohenry - much appreciated, and I hope you had a lovely Christmas. Happy endings are things I have trouble writing, as life isn't tidy like that! But one thing you can be sure of with Susie - she won't be down for long :)
Date: 27 Dec 2012 10:57 pm Title: 24th December, late evening (22-12-12)
Don't comment very often Finn but am still a regular reader of all your amazing stories!!!
Dont know who to feel more sorry for, Susie or Tristen in this
Thank you :)
So kind, Robinette - thank you for commenting! I appreciate knowing that you read my stuff!
Date: 26 Dec 2012 6:27 pm Title: Christmas day, just before lunch (26-12-12)
I made that same mistake many years ago! Just had a lovely catch-up, Finn, and this is a very special Christmas treat!
Glad you're enjoying it. It's my Christmas present to T&M fans :D
Date: 26 Dec 2012 1:23 pm Title: Christmas day, just before lunch (26-12-12)
Bless !!! I used to think that the song Lead us all in the dance *said he* was a song about Jesus and a dance settee... Quite what a dance settee was I couldn't have told you!! Cheeky Susie!!
Date: 25 Dec 2012 11:35 pm Title: Christmas morning, after present-opening has finished (25-12-12)
Lovely story, thank you. I can just see it happening!
Glad you like it :)
Date: 25 Dec 2012 8:33 pm Title: Christmas morning, after present-opening has finished (25-12-12)
Hee hee. Bad Luck Matty, and bless for Sarah wanting to be ready before Ted arrives. This is such a lovely story, really cheers me up, thank you Finn.
Glad it cheers you - it's meant to. Hopefully it isn't cheesy, though! Just a bit of fun
Date: 25 Dec 2012 5:50 pm Title: Christmas morning, at a rather more sensible time (24-12-12)
Love Rafaela wanting to open her presents before the crack of dawn! At lease Evelyn is not quite so scared of adults now. Lovely scene between Susie and Matty and a bit more info about their background too.
Evelyn has improved massively during the six months between T&M as it currently is, and this story. I'm very proud of her :)
Date: 22 Dec 2012 10:22 pm Title: 24th December, late evening (22-12-12)
Yay! Thank you! This has made my evening :)
Hurrah! Glad to hear it!
Date: 22 Dec 2012 9:18 pm Title: 24th December, late evening (22-12-12)
I like this so much am reviewing here too!! I really like the way Susie nearly puts her foot in it and then remves it swiftly :-D Thank you!
Aw, you're too sweet! Thanks to you!