Date: 01 Apr 2012 2:04 am Title: Chapter 1 - Arrival and a Waiter
Hmmm - why was he so surprised to hear Jack was alive - and was that shocked to hear he was married? Is there some mystery about Jack going on here?
Glad to see more of this,
Date: 07 Jan 2012 3:50 pm Title: Chapter 2 - A Surprise
Just found this. Really enjoying it. Thanks.
Date: 06 Jan 2012 7:01 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Arrival and a Waiter
No worries ! It is very easy to do!! I had two of my characters pulling up two chairs to the chair rather than fire !!
I admit that does make me feel a bit better! Thanks again!
Date: 06 Jan 2012 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 2 - A Surprise
Lol. I like the interaction here - only you might want to change is the word Swedish for the word Swiss !! Though I do now have a great image og Grizel bouncing around saying hurdy gurdys urdy gurdy like the Swedish chef on the muppets! Unkess that was intentional? I don't always get some jokes, so it could be me!!
No, you are right, that was an absolutely terrible mistake on my part - thank you for letting me know!
Date: 06 Jan 2012 2:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Arrival and a Waiter
Lol ! I like this different take on things! You have great details here, I like how you are painting the place with the details of the people around. Lol also at mistaking Neil Sheppherd for a waiter! More please?
Of course! Here it is...