Reviews For Grizel's Luck
Reviewer: Joanne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 2:04 am Title: Chapter 1 - Arrival and a Waiter

Hmmm - why was he so surprised to hear Jack was alive - and was that shocked to hear he was married? Is there some mystery about Jack going on here?

Glad to see more of this,

Thanks.

Reviewer: Chubby Monkey Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 9:07 pm Title: Chapter 2 - A Surprise

Awww, bless, that's really quite a sweet first introduction - and I like the idea of Grizel's games! Thankyou.

Reviewer: cal562301 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 3:50 pm Title: Chapter 2 - A Surprise

Just found this. Really enjoying it.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Beecharmer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 7:01 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Arrival and a Waiter

No worries ! It is very easy to do!! I had two of my characters pulling up two chairs to the chair rather than fire !!

Author's Response:

I admit that does make me feel a bit better! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Beecharmer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 2 - A Surprise

Lol. I like the interaction here - only you might want to change is the word Swedish for the word Swiss !! Though I do now have a great image og Grizel bouncing around saying hurdy gurdys urdy gurdy like the Swedish chef on the muppets! Unkess that was intentional? I don't always get some jokes, so it could be me!!

Author's Response:

No, you are right, that was an absolutely terrible mistake on my part - thank you for letting me know! 

Reviewer: PaulineS Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 6:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Arrival and a Waiter

Thank you this looks interesting.

Reviewer: Beecharmer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 2:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Arrival and a Waiter

Lol ! I like this different take on things! You have great details here, I like how you are painting the place with the details of the people around. Lol also at mistaking Neil Sheppherd for a waiter! More please?

Author's Response:

Of course! Here it is...



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