Date: 17 Apr 2012 6:51 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A PAIR OF STAR-CROSS'D LOVERS TAKE...a walk...
I am liking the drabble, but my petanticism is screaming at me to say that Juliet was fifteen when she started at the Chalet School.
Oh, and, oh no, Juliet, I think you're in trouble. Careful there, girl! *hopes that it's a married doctor with no wish to cheat on his wife and they're talking about medical things/Joey/life*
Just because Donal sees a couple doesn't mean they are a couple, right?
Absolutely true: Juliet was fifteen and a half when she started, but unfortunately, due to her incredibly terrible memory, and the fact that she was very flustered at the time, meant that she lost her wits! :-D
Date: 03 Jan 2012 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Result of a Letter
So far i have found it to be very good
I hope to see more works of yours shortly
keep up the good work
Thank you, Kate! Very kind of you!
Date: 03 Jan 2012 6:19 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Result of a Letter
Have just read the first five chapters, and now you've left me on a ciff! An interesting premise, and reminds me of my first OFSTED experience! *grins* Not that any of them were as bad as this cold, judgemental character.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 1:17 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Result of a Letter
Zazz said : Haha, I never had a problem with Donal myself, but I suppose anyone who could be influenced like that by a sister would be quite pathetic! I'm also slightly worried as to what is going on - this is not at all how I set out for the story to be... *
Yep, that sounds like drabbling alright !! Thats a good sign, go with it!
I was probably prejudiced against Donal as I wanted Juliet to stay there forever, and he stole her. :-D
Date: 03 Jan 2012 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Picnic...
Oooh dear!! What on earth is going on ! I slightly hope Juliet might be interested, anyone would be better than drippy Donal! Thank you!
Haha, I never had a problem with Donal myself, but I suppose anyone who could be influenced like that by a sister would be quite pathetic! I'm also slightly worried as to what is going on - this is not at all how I set out for the story to be... :D Thank you for all the lovely and encouraging reviews!
Date: 01 Jan 2012 8:54 pm Title: Chapter 3 - School begins - with another Grand Entrance
Undercurrents all around! Enjoying this, although wondering how this can be resolved ! Don't worry too much if there are only a few reviews to begin with, people don't comment a lot necessarily. I know I am enjoying it, and I'm sure some others will start commenting as this goes along. Just enjoy the writing of it, and the reviews will be a nuce surprise when they happen. More please soon! I hope that Grizel manages to keep her temper in check!