Date: 19 May 2014 5:39 am Title: On the shores of the lake
Sorry to hear this proabably won't be finished, but what there is well merits reviewing :)
I really like your description of the sunset and lake here, and Litovsky's apparent conversation with the woman in red is intriguing.
Date: 15 May 2014 3:25 am Title: In The Bar
Even in text I feel a strong urge to strangle Miss Brandon - poor Hilda and Nell! I suspect Nell might actually strangle her, or at least tell her very plainly how much they don't appreciate her company, though Hilda is trying to restrain her... If they're lucky she might leave them alone and go off after Alejandro instead, and if she doesn't at least they have Felix and Nicholas as reinforcements. I think they'll get on considerably better (loved Nell lecturing Felix about grammar!).
Ah. Hehe. This story. D'you know, Seven was nagging me at one of the Oxford meets about two years ago, asking if I were ever going to finish this, and I had to admit I'd forgotten the plot…
Date: 15 May 2014 3:13 am Title: In The Pinewoods
(ordinarily, Nell would tackle something a little more challenging, but then it is only the first day of their walking holiday)
*snort* Is Hilda gonig to survive this walking holiday?
I love the desrciptions at the beginning. I'm intrigued by the woman in red coat - especially given the title.
I like Nicholas and Felix already! I'd be tempted to strangle Felix too, I think ;)
Date: 27 Oct 2011 5:55 am Title: On the doorstep
Have just read this - intriguing and gripping! Poor Hilda, she is going to feel so bad the next day!
Hmm, she is rather. I think tomorrow's ramble up a mountainside may have to be cancelled...
Thanks for the review!
Date: 26 Oct 2011 8:33 pm Title: On the doorstep
Hmmm, yes, how well I do remember what that particular condition feels like! Now please come back and tell us that they're all ok! Now! Please!
Ooh, patience my young friend! All will be revealed in time.
Date: 08 Oct 2011 11:20 pm Title: On the shores of the lake
MMMmmmmm interesting, thank you for the update, short as it is it had a lot of information in it ! What is Felix up to, and why is he pretending to be someone else? As you say, Curiouser and Curiouser...
Date: 29 Sep 2011 1:59 pm Title: In The Bar
Hi Finn. Is there anything significant (other than a possible EBDism!) in the fact that Felix calls his friend 'Nicholas Fairbrother' in the previous chapter but he's 'Mr Chilcott' in this one..?
But it's all very intriguing anyway!
Erm...no comment! Thanks for the review!