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Reviewer: Justjenn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2016 1:10 am Title: Chapter 20

Well done!

Reviewer: Jean Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 20

Oh wow! I have had such a good time reading this. Thank you very much....I had no idea there were things like this to read on the site. I am in for a good time! 

It has been almost like reading an original EBD. Thoroughly enjoyable. 

Reviewer: Sellenger Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved this.  It was so good to see Joey realising that "butting in" could have consequences that she never intended.

Reviewer: chanlaichun Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2012 5:17 pm Title: Chapter 20

Are you sure you're talking about the Joey Bettany / Maynard EBD created?   There's no evidence in any of the books that she lacked self-esteem or self-awareness; as a grown-up, she knew when to hold her tongue, and she knew when NOT to butt in because butting in would do more harm than good.   Look at her she refrained from talking to Kathie Farrers about her misperception of Mary-Lou's attitude and how she made sure she found out about the relationship between Richenda Fry and her father before "butting in".

The relationship between Joey and Hilda Annersley as depicted in your story is totally at variance with that depicted by EBD.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for your feedback. Just to say, this is in Ste Therese's house as the SDL's definition of stories to go in this house is: "Although in keeping with the Chalet School Universe, these stories touch on themes and ideas that EBD wouldn't have written about herself." In writing this story, I was not attempting to emulate EBD perfectly; I was using her ideas about the characters as a springboard for an imaginative story. There is a wide range of fiction on this board, much of which builds on individuals' ideas and interpretations and hopefully these are placed within the appropriate houses so people aren't disappointed when they read.

Reviewer: Sheila Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 20

I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this

Reviewer: keren Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 20

very good

 

like EBd with a few tongue in cheek comments

Reviewer: MaryR Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 4:09 pm Title: Chapter 20

A satisfying, very EBDish, ending for all. Thank you, Lisa.

Reviewer: JB1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 11:41 am Title: Chapter 20

I've enjoyed this so much, Lisa. I'm quite sad it's fiished.

Reviewer: Elbee Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2011 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 20

This has been a super story to read, and fits in perfectly with the CS universe. I'm glad there was a happy ending for all of them! Thanks, Lisa.

Reviewer: PaulineS Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2011 7:11 pm Title: Chapter 20

Thank you Lisa for a lovely story.

Reviewer: Elder in Ontario Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2011 6:45 pm Title: Chapter 20

So, despite all the cliffs, things have turned out really well in the end - and even there, you've given us the twist of Amelia's great aunt's bequest coming just at this time.  I really, really admire Amelia for her decisions - it would have been so easy for her simply to want to return to the Royal Ballet School at once. However, given that Jack has decreed she not dance full time yet anyway, her actions are extremely satisfactory and I'm sure that a number of would-be dancers or musicians will benefit from her scholarship in due course.  I am also pleased that Frederick came in front of an understanding judge whose actions ensured he received the treatment he so badly needed rather than condemning him to a prison cell.

Thank you, Lisa - this has been a fascinating and very interesting story.

 

Reviewer: Squirrel Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 19

I've just caught up on several chapters worth of this Lisa, and... I don't really know where to start!!! So much seems to have happened in such a short time.

I like the way you have pulled the threads together so far, and the way answers are coming. There is a long way for everyone to go, but hopefully they are beginning to make a good start on it all now.

And so Amelia is going to get her wish of spending time with the ballerina who so caught her attention before, and once she has recovered, she may even be able to train under her? I can see that being some joy.

Thanks Lisa.

Reviewer: Elder in Ontario Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 6:26 pm Title: Chapter 19

I must admit I heaved a large sigh of relief when Amelia's fever broke, even though she's a longish convalescence ahead of her. 

So, most of your ducks are now in a row, Lisa - I'm so glad about all of these outcomes - yes, even the fact that Frederick is ready to face the music (sorry!!) for his past actions.  It will be interesting to see how he fares over that - I hope you will tell us in the last chapter. 

Reviewer: MaryR Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2011 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 18

Hopefully, now they've all done their worst, things will now sort themselves out and they can become a family again. with Meryl being stronger and Frederick a little more sensitive to others's needs. After all, you are going to let Amelia recover, aren't you, Lisa!!!! *grins evilly*

Reviewer: Elder in Ontario Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2011 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 18

I'm sure Isabel will have been relieved to tell Jack Maynard of Amelia's early morning exploits, even though she didn't know what the girl was actually doing.  It was good to see Meryl show some backbone with Frederick, too, though I doubt she realised just how close to breaking point he is.

Am not happy about Amelia's fever, but not surprised either.

Thanks, Lisa - I see you are going to keep us moving from cliff to cliff right to the end here, but am looking forward to the final two episodes.

 

Reviewer: JB1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2011 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 18

Stupid Frederick. How could he be surprised that Meryle wanted a divorce? Grr.

I am loving this. I shall be sad when it ends.

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you :-) Couple more dramas before it ends!!

Reviewer: keren Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2011 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 17

Sorry I didnot comment before

 

I kept getting those things iwth the numbers to copy

Anyway excellent story, enjoying very much, near EBD style, enjoying very much

Reviewer: JB1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2011 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 17

Thanks for such a long update.

Reviewer: MaryR Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

So all heading in the same direction, but where will they meet and what will have happened to Amelia in the meantime? Hopefully she is going to escape the worst of what the weather and her injury could do to her....

Thanks, Lisa.

Reviewer: JB1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 10:01 am Title: Chapter 15

Liked the insight into Joey there.

I know Meryl's ill but she's not winning my award for best parent. I'm wondering why I have more sympahty for Frederick than for her. Great characters.

Reviewer: Elder in Ontario Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2011 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 15

Hmm - well the various threads are certainly converging, but I don't think you've done anything to get us off the cliff yet, at least so far as Amelia is concerned - I *do* hope that the search party in Berne will find her soon!!  Meantime, I'm now wondering just what will happen when Frederick and Meryl meet, as they surely will before long.

I'm sure that all will be happily resolved in due course if we are patient - though I can see that still being some way off!! 

Thanks, Lisa - I think!! You are certainly keeping up the suspense here.

Reviewer: JB1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2011 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 14

I was about to thank you for such a lovely long update but what a cliff!

Reviewer: Elder in Ontario Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 14

Yikes!!!  I felt very sorry for Amelia in the last episode, but didn't get chance to post there. I wonder just where she has found herself now, and how long it will be before help arrives - at least she is under cover though. 

No matter what illness she has let herself in for, nor what punishment the school will mete out to her for going off like that, I'm sure in the end she will count it all worthwhile to have been able to actually talk to Gisella like that!   But I'm also concered about whether she has done permanent damage to her leg.

Thanks, Lisa - please don't keep us in suspense for too long!

Reviewer: janbrown Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 2:30 pm Title: Chapter 13

More please as soon as possible. As with Cestina I have been caught up in your story but this twist was so unexpected.



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