Date: 02 Jan 2012 2:26 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Run-Through
Sometimes that needs to be done, you have left us on a cliff though!!! I didn't get the bit with hypothesis? Nor the use of deducted? It almost felt like words substituted, was it intentional? Thank you for More Scar!
I really should have read through that paragraph before going on with the chapter, it was written ages before I decided to add anything to it. I don't have a clue what I was thinking. The cliff had been in my mind for a good while though, glad you noticed it! :D
Date: 27 Dec 2011 2:37 am Title: Chapter 14 - Leading up to Saturday 26/12/11
Lol. Thank you! It's bad that the staff aren't aware of the bullying. But I still need to know about how the spell will be broken and they able to move on.
Lol to the teacher being quite keen for junior mischief!!
You'll find all of that out eventually, but there's a lot to get through first, such as Scar's heritage, Amber's heritage, Ellie and Mary, things relating to modern devices, Miss Felgate and Miss Parker, and a bundle of other normal schoolgirl life happenings.
Date: 12 Nov 2011 7:19 pm Title: Chapter 12 - More Maths 12/11/11
Intresting - and is Fraulein Lambert Jack or Gay??
You've made the link I wanted you to make in Problem, well done. As for Fraulein Lambert, she's actually Anne Lambert, Jack's 'colourless' older sister.
Date: 25 Aug 2011 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Unpacking
Thanks Minim, another well flowing update, establishing the characters really well, it really feels like a first day at the CS but with your own style. Good for Scar not rising to Skye's nastiness. I like the fact that Scar is getting her prefect duties done but not changing in herself.
Date: 22 Aug 2011 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Assembly
Thanks Minim, bless for the excited little ones. This update flowed really well, you got a lot of background names in without it feeling forced.
Not keen on the idea of Skye Wetherbye in any sort of position of power. :-( Though I now have the rhyming of her name in my head again which is quite fun.
I had thought Ellie might get it, glad she is supporting Scar, and hope Laura doesn't cause too many problems.
Ellie's Form Rep, so the staff'd say that she already had enough responsibility. :)
Date: 16 Aug 2011 7:11 pm Title: Chapter 6 - At the School
Oooh, a Real CS type crossover situation, I like it. I don't know if I want them to manage it or not !! Thanks minim.
But not really RCS. :)
And you can make up your mind about managing later, when there have been a few more deaths and weird illnesses and problems...
Date: 09 Aug 2011 4:21 pm Title: Chapter 3 - On the Platform
He he, this lot are going to give their elders some trouble I can see ! Lol to the gender confused by being taken in the wrong toilets bit. Like the repetition of Scar checking the ticket too. Thanks minim, looking forward to more !
Date: 06 Aug 2011 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Caroline and the Boss
OOohhh yay !! A good start, though poor Scar being a bit depressed, hopefully a spy free term would be good for her. Like the "you ca.. may" leave and so true about having to contribute to random people all the time at work ! Like the way Caroline signed it ! Thanks minim, looking forward to this. Just be aware with open office that you need to save as a word doc if you are sending to anyone else, and that can mean that tables don't always show up which is really annoying !