Date: 10 Mar 2012 7:16 pm Title: Cambridge - confronting the past
Really gets me every time this scene - it adds a depth to Nancy, such that in my own writing, I realise that Meg having died is almost canon in my mind now. I didn't get to comment as you wrote this, as I wasn't on CBB, and I know I've said it before, but I really do love this story, and the world it creates.
Date: 11 Jun 2011 11:04 am Title: Not an ideal husband
This is such a lovely gentle scene, I really like how you build them starting to fall for each other. That smile on Kathy's face is really sweet. Thanks jayj. I came to the board too late to comment on scenes as you went along, so re reading like this is great.