Date: 25 Feb 2014 10:27 am Title: Chapter 8
Glad Rix has found out about Rayner's son, really liked the scene with Mary Lou there, she is just right. I keep thinking to leave a space of a couple of chapters before reviewing but finding things I like in every chapter. Apologies that am probably filling your inbox up with notifications !
Date: 25 Feb 2014 10:20 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh dear, spoke too soon with giveing Rayner a good impression. A much better reason for it than the halls of residence party though ! Hope he doesn't rely too much on Dan and damage that friendship. The "he doesn't need to worry about that" bit worries me with pregnancy if she's still only in her 30s ...
Date: 24 Feb 2014 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
This feels very real, and likely that it would be much harder for Rix than David - even harder given that they started off more like brothers than cousins. Just realised from the reviews why it seems familiar, i obviously read the beginning here !
Date: 22 Feb 2014 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good to see this again, I do like your Rix! He's very believable, and a contrast to David who has never had to worry about money, or about his parents' health. The Bettanys are so much more of a close family unit than the Maynards or the Russells.
Date: 16 Jul 2011 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 16
Thanks, Mia. I guess Jem forgot to give him the cheque after the meal earlier in the week.
Also, are timelines switched round here? I thought Daphne was close in age to Cecil which would mean she was born when the School was in Switzerland and not on St. Briavels.
Author's Response: The school is in Switzerland honey