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Date: 26 Jul 2011 8:40 am Title: Chapter 5

Thank you - again I like the way that Dick is aware that something is wrong and wants to protect him but isn't sure why. Also that Adam is relieved by John saying thank you, is at least bothered about John's feelings.

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Date: 26 Jul 2011 8:36 am Title: Chapter 4

Poor John, but very realistic. Nice scene with Rix here - I like how the members of the family are busy and don't realise, but are also aware that he is not himself, and caring for him. Thanks again.

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Date: 26 Jul 2011 8:29 am Title: Chapter 3

I like seeing how this family fits together, feels very real, also how confused John is. Thank you.

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Date: 26 Jul 2011 8:23 am Title: Chapter 2

Thanks, again really vividly painted. Can really feel for John being so unsure how to take things, but desperate to talk.

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Date: 26 Jul 2011 8:20 am Title: Chapter 1

I think I started this on the archives, certainly the beginning seemd familiar, but lost it again due to having a terrible memory for story names! Tjanks for reposting, I'm glad to get a chance to read thus properly. I can really see things the way that you have written them here, almost feel the cold water ! Thanks



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