Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:17 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Her Tale
It lost my review from yesterday! Damn phone internet. I'm glad I came in to check whether this was a new update or I wouldn't have realised.
This makes a lot of sense Minim. I like the fact that they are listening to each other. Is it a School named Mormon School or a 'Mormon School'? For Mormons?
It's just a name that came from the back of my cluttered mind.
Date: 28 Nov 2011 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Lacrosse
Yay for more Margot - I do like your description of Francie seeing Margot and realising that she had forgotten her.
lol to the " (although their main interests were in the other, unmarried, mistresses rather than the game itself)." line !! :-D
Thanks Minim - more when ready please !
Date: 12 Nov 2011 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Term Carries On
I like the idea that without Margot Ruey and Francie might have been friends. Interesting that Odette might be the key to the mystery ! Thank you for an update, yaaay!
(I think you have a typo though where Len is walking with Len instead of I guess Odette ! Thought you might like to know.)
*goes back to check* oops. Will rectify.
Date: 08 Aug 2011 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 10 - The Start of Term
Ooooh I didn't realised till I got here that this was an update of Margot, yay !! What a cool twist having Francie sheepdog Ruey with Margot not being around ! Looking forward to more. Not sure who the boy is though ??
Date: 03 Jul 2011 3:46 pm Title: Chapter 9 - A Cottage in England
Thanks Minim, can see why you had fun writing this one, its great, so many little details ! I like the fact that Hilda and Nell are actually thinking of the expulsion as a positive thing for Margot, and also that they are aware of the labelling that goes one with the Triplets. Lol to the cider at 8 in the morning bit, and the priorities they all have in their shopping lists !!! Excellent update, and good way to tell the story without having to repeat Tyrol word for word. Lol too about the "No one could be pregnant in that time" and "Not more triplets" :-D
Date: 25 Jun 2011 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Eldest by Half an Hour
Poor Len. She feels pulled in both directions. She wants to be there for her sister, but she also wants to be friends with the girl who is her sister's enemy. not a nice situation.
Thanks Minim :-)