Reviewer: Rietta Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 9:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hehe, I love the twist at the end! Very nice little drabble. =)



Author's Response: Gosh, thank you, Rietta. This is a bit of a shock after all these years. It was actually posted on the old board even longer ago!

Reviewer: Elennare Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 1:46 am Title: Chapter 1

*giggles* Brilliant! Poor Helen - and a great twist there at the end :)

Reviewer: Elle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

An unexpected twist in the last line!

Reviewer: Squirrel Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2011 5:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

*giggles*

 

This is absolutely brilliant.  In some ways, I think it's even better when you know what's coming, cause you can enjoy the humour of the scene the whole way through.

 

Thank You Mary. :)

Reviewer: Nightwing Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 2:05 am Title: Chapter 1

Haha, I remember reading this before but had completely forgotten that little twist at the end!



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