Date: 27 May 2017 1:29 am Title: An unexpected arrival
I'm really, really enjoying this (and it's very well-written), but my soul is crying, 'What about Hilda?'. Perhaps she's not very significant in your universe, or perhaps there are further complications yet to come??? Thank you anyway, I check for updates every day!
Date: 24 May 2017 10:27 pm Title: Snow!
Love that they both still think the same things even after all this time. Nice to see Nell's softer side towards Con when she realises that she's starting with a cold.
Thanks crm :-D
Thanks Vick for commenting!
Date: 23 May 2017 11:50 pm Title: Grace, and Elma
An interesting chapter - good explanation of Grace's situation, and how it helped Nell deal with Elma. Think Con is being a bit of a "spineless jellyfish", hope she bucks up a bit and doesn't make things too diffficult for Nell.
Date: 11 Apr 2017 5:30 pm Title: A shift in perspective
I hope Madge is happy with Con being given a job without any consultation. Is Con thinking that their relationship will go back to Tyrol days? She seems to be unaware how much she hurt Nell when she married Jock and I'm not sure she understands that Nell might have put her job on the line for her.
Date: 23 Mar 2017 11:42 pm Title: Under cover of darkness
This is very good. I can't wait to find out how Nell explains Con to Madge and Hilda and how Con's presence is going to affect Nell who seems uncertain. It already seems to have taken her back to their previous relationship but life has moved on for Nell. Is Con expecting everything to return to how it was?
Date: 21 Mar 2017 11:48 am Title: An unexpected arrival
Love to see another story from you. The ages didn't gel even in EBD land as the boys were the same age as the triplets (which is impossible as Con was clearly not with child and teaching at the school then!) Can't wait to see where this goes
Date: 21 Mar 2017 8:36 am Title: Under cover of darkness
Interesting to see the effect this has on Nell, and also to hear how Con's life has gone. I hope Nell doesn't regret this too much, but am glad they have this privacy together. Hope they remember to replace the pillow barrier !
Date: 21 Mar 2017 12:10 am Title: Under cover of darkness
I wouldn't worry about the timeline - never worried EBD! I feel for Con but more for Nell here. Con went with what family and society expected of her and it didn't work. Nell got over her and made a satisfactory life and now Con has come back to disrupt it.